someone can revise my composition?

"Religion" and "philosophy" are intertwined not only in the time dimension but also and in the connotation and logic structure. It is a long landscape which constitutes and supports ing the human spirit and also cultural life. It is a characterization of the human survival turn into the conscientious of history. They are both the growth of human spirit, explicit representation of human life, culture, consciousness. and They are also necessary in the spiritual, cultural life of the reflection and reconstruction of the future. In certain ways, "religion" and "philosophy" all is a kind of "living" behavior. They are both the impulsion (Impulse?) of humans finding their spirit home.