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I am a Mechanical Engineer. My office is not far from my house, yet I drive to work so I can drop my daughter off at school. I work Monday thru Friday, from 8 am to 5 pm. As soon as arrive to work I put on my uniform, then drink tea. At 9 am I talk to my boss about what I need to do for the day. I review drawings and technical manuals. Afterwards, I draw sketches of the details necessary for equipment assembly. At noon I have lunch. After lunch I work out more details and help with assembling parts. At the end of the work day I clean my workplace and go home.
In English, some words are not necessary, for they are implied. Simplicity in writing is more professional. They only time you want to add elaborate details, is if you are describing something special in a story, novel, or creative writing. Also arrangment of words and sentences in a chronological or organized manner is for more advanced and professional in writing. For example, grouping alike words or sentences together. Finish one thought before you start another, that way you don't go back to the first thought in the middle of your paragraph. Also I changed "dinner" to "lunch" only because in America our noon meal is called lunch. However, in some countries the noon meal is the main meal of the day. For instance, my mom is from Czech Republic and to her, lunch is more like an American dinner. She has always had her biggest meal in the middle of the day. I am not sure if you are the same and think of "lunch" as "dinner." Either way, it is probably more correct to call the noon day meal lunch regardless. Dinner is the meal later on in the night, after work and before bed. I apologize if I mispelled or mistyped any thing.
My work.
My profession is mechanical engineer of mechanics. Every working day, from Monday to Friday, I work. My The office is located not far from my the house but I take go by the car (or better: I drive because...) because I take bring my daughter to school on the way I bring daughter to school. My working day begins in the at 8th am. After Upon arrival to the office, I dress a in work attire working form and then I drink tea. Around In the 9th am I talk to my boss (or : supervisor/manager) chief. We plan out the day today. Then I study drawings and technical documentation. I do sketches and on them I make the details which are necessary in equipment assembling process. At 12 o'clock I have lunch dinner. After the lunch brake a dinner I also am again engaged in detail manufacturing (maybe better: production) of details and I participate in the assembling assembly. At In the 5th pm I clean a my workplace and I go home.
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