On Civility
Today many different doctors came to our office, because they had to arrange a meeting. Doctor is intelligent profession, but not all of doctors are intelligent. Some of them cast their clothes on another's tables and chairs. They noised and discussed absent colleagues. It was terrible!!!
Of course doctors help for people and save their lives, but they always must remember about manners of intelligent people! Man can be smart and beautiful, but if he'll be a boorish person, it'll be disgustingly!
I hope, that not only doctors, but also to all people will respect to each other!
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On Civility
Today many, different doctors came to our office, because they had to arrange a meeting. Doctors is are intelligent profession, but not all of doctors are intelligent. Some of them cast left their clothes on another's tables and chairs. They made noised and discussed absent colleagues. It was terrible!!!
Of course doctors help for people and save their lives, but they always must remember about their manners. of intelligent people! Man Men can be smart and beautiful, but if he'll they are going to be boorish brutish person, it'll then it is going to be disgustingly! disgusting.
I hope that, (Take out this comma) that not only doctors, but also to all people will respect to each other!
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Thank you, Gregg!
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Suggested corrections (and apologies if my corrections change the meaning anywhere....)
Several doctors came to our office today, because they had to arrange a meeting. Being a doctor requires intelligence, but not all doctors are intelligent. Some of them just threw their coats (?) on the tables and chairs. They also engaged in gossip about their colleagues who weren’t present. That was terrible!!!
Of course, doctors help people and can save lives, but they should also remember to have manners. A person can be smart, a person can be attractive, yet if he or she is rude, it’s simply disgusting. I hope that all people, not only doctors, will show respect to one another! (or: 'I think that all people, not just doctors, should show respect to one another.' This sounds more natural to me.)
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