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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Denis. I'm learning English and I really like it. I love music, especially British. I prefer britpop, indie and trip-hop. My favorite bands are Oasis, The Verve, Coldplay, Kasabian, DM, Massive Attack, Archive, Stateless, Chemical Brothers, Morcheebo, of course The Beatles and many others. Last time I'm bit crazy about The XX and BIGkids. Basically all of them British. But I love and some U.S. bands too, such as 30 s.t.m., Blue October, Beastie Boys and R.E.M. for example. I like travel and history. I have been to a few countries around the world. Like any man, I love sports and cars. My favorite sport is ice-hockey. I really like watching it. I am getting pleasure from playing tennis, ping-pong and valleyball. My English is far from perfect, and I would be glad to any conversation in that language. If someone needs help in Russian, just write to me I'll be very glad to help. )

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На здоровье)) Я отнюдь не против ошибок, просто полагала, что Вы ждете исправлений.))
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Лена спасибо! Очень мило с Вашей стороны, что Вы уделили время анализу моего произведения. Я понял свои ошибки и постараюсь не допускать их впредь! Особенно "I love and" )))
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Денис, здесь (иногда, а может быть часто) довольно сложно получить исправления. Не имею малейшего понятия почему. :) У меня не идеальные знания английского тоже, хотя я рискну поправить пару предложений. "I'm a bit crazy about..." (a bit); "Basically, all of them are British" (are); "However, I love some U.S. bands" (but, насколько я помню, не используется в начале предложения, а "I love and" может быть только в русском языке), "I like travelling\I like to travel"; "I love sport" (без -s); "I would be glad of (noun)\I would be glad to (verb)". Надеюсь мои исправления правильны. :)
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I guess that it's quite boring to read. Well.. anyway thanks to all for your advice and corrections. It's a blessing to know that my English is perfect! )))) * sarcasm * Despite everything I love this community and I am going to continue to write something more, from time to time. ;)
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oops! sorry, picture turned out too big for such a small message )

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