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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm from China.I am learning English Because i want to talk with a foreign friend, want to travel abroad.My native language is chinese.So I hope to have a communication object can improve my English ability

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm from China.I am learning English Because i want to talk with a foreign friend, want to travel abroad.My native language is chinese.So I hope to have a communication ability that can improve my English.

    good!!!! hope that you can improve your English.

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 First notebook entry: Introducing Myself

I'm from China. I am learning English because I want to talk with a foreign friend_and_want to travel abroad. My native language is Chinese, so I hope to have a communication, the object can being to improve my English ability.

 

The phrase "want to" modifies (applies to) both "talk with a foriegn friend," and "travel abroad." It doesn't have to be repeated.  Instead of communication, did you really mean conversation?

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