fish also sleep
I got up at ten o'clock this morning , i don't know waht must i do ? so I liying on the sofa from the bed, there is a fishbowl on the table and in front of the sofa , i looking at the fish in fishbowl last few moments that i find they are sleeping, wow, they stated at there don't move and dont breath , at first , i think they are diede? so i knocked the fishbowl make they wake up . i know that at first time.
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Fish Also Sleep
I got up at ten o'clock this morning. I didn't know what I could do, so I got up from bed and lied down on the sofa. There was a fishbowl on the table in front of the sofa. I looked at the fishbowl and found the fish sleeping. They stayed still, seemingly without moving or breathing. At first , I thought they were dead, so I knocked on the fishbowl to wake them up.
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