my Athletic meets~!
do you have athletic meets in your school ,when you are a student? aha ~ it tooken by my school in this Friday. it always be taken once a year.and every student have a chance to take part in it . we have many items .and it makes me very excited. we share and we happy. the yellaw T-shirt is our class clothes.we are happy in it . we all had a good time~!!!!!
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My athletic meetings!
Do you have athletic meetings in the school where you study? aha! I do! It tooken place in my school in this last Friday. It always takes place once a year and every student has the chance to take part in it. We have many activities to choose, and it makes me very excited it is very exciting!. we share and we happy. The yellow colour on our T-shirts is the colour of our class. We are happy to wear it. We all had a good time!
the photo of Chinese students
*"Share" always needs a direct object (a noun or a noun phrase) to give meaning to what you're saying. Example: "We share a lot of things", "She said she didn't have money, so I decided to share my food with her"
*We ARE happy. Don't forget the verb!
Keep up the good work! ;)
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