Have A Baby Or Not

Recently I read many new(news) about some students killed(killing)  themselves beacause of the hard(difficult) homework. Some parents said their child(children) do the home work till twelve o' clock and get up (at) five o'clock in the morning (to) continue it. Also(,) when they are in the shcool(,) the teacher hit (teachers hit/the teacher hits) them or scold them if they can't finish home work or answer wrong questions (answer the questions wrong). And I also read (that) some food made people sick ,same milk powder made babies grow really big head(s), same thing made...

1.about + doing sth

2. hard work , difficult homework (just the habit, no error in grammar)

3. always remember: 3rd person singular + does

Feed yourself is a problem, feed yourself healthy is a big problem (Whether you can feed yourself is a problem. However, whether you can feed yourself healthily is a problem that's much more serious) . No wonder more and more people choose don't have baby. (not to have a baby). 

Just this year, My four friends (four of my friends) are all having babies...

Hi Cat, you did very well! Everyone can understand your meaning without fail.  Very interesting to read! 

I thought, instead of pointing out small corrections,( I will let other native speakers who are better than me do that:)) I would imagine myself in  a high school English composition class. The teacher has just given me your topic. What would I  do with it? How would I produce your ideas in my essay? So I went ahead and re-wrote your ideas as if they were an assignment for school. Below is my version of your essay. Please notice the structure that I follow and how all my ideas(your ideas) are tightly connected  to the main idea that I present in the first paragraph. Notice the the simple ransition words that signal a new idea . Also notice how in that last paragraph I summarize breifly all the main points of my essay.

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To Have a Baby or Not?

The recent changes in our society have caused me to question whether or not having children is the right thing to do .I have recently read many news articles that can cause one to  makes several argument  against having children.

First, the intense pressure on children to succeed in school, the amount of homework they must do until late into the evening, and the beatings and scoldings that they must endure from teachers who are never satisfied is almost unbearable for many parents.Who is willing to watch their son or daughter suffer like that?

Next,it seems that the food quality these days, including milk powder, puts many children in danger. In some cases, the milk powder has caused infants' heads to grow unusually large.These days, access to food is no longer a problem, but access to healthy food can no longer be guaranteed!This is worrisome when thinking about whether or not to have children.No wonder some people have decided not to have children.

Finally, many young  people don't have the proper financial conditions to support having a child.I have several friends who are having babies. However, their husbands' salaries are a paltry 250-500 dollars!I can't understand this! Yes, everyone has the right to their own life style but trying to raise a child under these poor financial conditions  shows that they are not thinking about the respect or the quality of the child's life at all! Some of these people didn't even graduate from  high school!When  you visit them, there is not a toy or a book in sight!  

 It is human nature to want a child.Most people want the happiness that a child can bring to their lives and they hope their child can have a much better life than they have had. However,  recent changes in our society, such as extremely intense competition in education, unhealthy food products and people's  lack of ability to afford a child,has many young  people questioning whether or not having a child is the right thing to do. Certainly the many news reports about the problems relating to having children has produced some strong and convincing  arguments against having children