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First notebook entry: Introducing myself 我学习普通话 ,因为很有意思 。可是我说的不好。我是荷兰人。 我的工作:我是士兵。你呢?

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

我在学习普通话 ,因为它很有意思 。可是我说的得不好。我是荷兰人。 我的工作:我是士兵。你呢?  (or 我的职业是士兵 \我是一名士兵)

 

you must separate these words :

 

的: the words  In front of "的”generally used to modify, limit the words  behind the"的”and to explain ,how  is the thing .  usually,  they are nouns (i mean the words behind the  word  "的"

Structure form is commonly:adj.(pro.)+ 的+ n.

eg:幸福的生活(xìng fú de shēng huó)

 

地:the words In front of "地” generally used to describe the action  of the words   which behind of the"地". and to  explain  how is the action.  usually, they are v. (i mean the words behind the  word "地"

Structure form is commonly:adv.+地+v.

eg:仔细地看(zǐ xì de kàn)

 

得:the words behind the "得" generally used to be additional remarks ,to  explain  how is the action  in front of the word "得"

Structure form is commonly:v.+得+adv.

eg:跑得快(pǎo dé kuài)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

我学习普通话 ,因为很有意思 。可是我说的不好。我是荷兰人。 我的工作:我是士兵。你呢?

我在学习中文,因为中文很有意思。可是我说得不好。我是荷兰人。我是一名士兵。你呢?

It's better you say 中文, this is more formal and 中文 is the international name of Chinsese :). And you are self introduce, is not a CV for job, so just say your career straight away.

Well done Steve!!!

 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

我学习普通话 ,因为很有意思 。可是我说的不好。我是荷兰人。 我的工作:我是士兵。你呢?

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谢谢你漂亮的小姐
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

我学习普通话 ,因为很有意思 。可是我说的不好。我是荷兰人。 我的工作:我是士兵。(我的工作:士兵。)你呢?

我是学生。

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