My husband's birthday
I tell you my husband's birthday.
My husband's birthday on the 11th of June. He celebrated his birthday on the Saturday 9th of June. It was summer. The weather was warm. We celebrated his birthday party at home. We invited his friends and relatives to the party. We got up early in the morning. We went to the shop to bouhgt something we needed for the party. My mother-in-law stayed at home. She cleanded the house, made cake, laid the table and waited for the guests.
At four o'clock his relatives and friends came to congratulate him and he was glad to saw them.
They brought flowers, books, sweets and birthday presents. He thanked his friends and relatives.
His friends and relatives usually bought garden plants for him because we have a big garden.
We ate and drank. We spoke about our life, hobbies and future. We told stories and funny jokes. We enjoyed his birthday party.
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My husband's birthday.
My husband's birthday is on the 11th of June, but he celebrated it on Saturday the 9th. It was summer, and warm weather. We held a party at home, inviting his relatives and friends. We were up early in the morning to shop for things we needed. My mother-in-law stayed at home so she could clean the house, make a cake, lay the table and wait for the guests. At four o'clock his relatives and friends came to congratulate him, and he was delighted to see them. They brought flowers, books, sweets and birthday presents, for which he thanked them. It is usual for them to bring garden plants for him because we have a big garden. We ate and we drank, we spoke about our life, our hobbies and our future, we told stories and laughed over a few jokes. We thoroughly enjoyed his birthday party!
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My husband's birthday
I will tell you about my husband's birthday.
My husband's birthday is on the 11th of June. He celebrated his birthday on the Saturday 9th of June. It was summer. The weather was warm. We had his birthday party at home. We invited his friends and relatives to the party. We got up early in the morning. We went to the shop to buy something that we needed for the party. My mother-in-law stayed at home. She cleaned the house, made cake, laid the table and waited for the guests.
At four o'clock his relatives and friends came to congratulate him and he was glad to see them.
They brought flowers, books, sweets and birthday presents. He thanked his friends and relatives.
His friends and relatives usually buy garden plants for him because we have a big garden.
We ate and drank. We spoke about our life, hobbies and future. We told stories and funny jokes. We enjoyed his birthday party.
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