Is homework necessary?

I've heard that some schools have already switched to method of learning - no homework. I think that is not quite right, and you need to get and do homework. Because, firstly, so fixed the knowledge gained in the classroom, and secondly it will organize children and creates a certain order in their activities, and of third, checking homework the teacher helps them to identify the level of pupils' knowledge, understanding, how children understand the material and whether it is necessary to change something.
Another issue that they need to give wisely, not to kill the children the desire to learn at all. This may be a small job in a sufficient amount so that children can and do the job, and visit numerous circles so that they had time on their personal interests, so to speak, not to deprive children of their childhood

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Is homework necessary?

I've heard that some schools have already switched to their method of learning - no homework. I think that is not quite right, and you need to get and do homework. Because, firstly, so fixed to fix the knowledge gained in the classroom, and secondly, it will organize children and creates a certain order in their activities, and of thirdly, by checking homework the teacher helps them to identify the level of the pupils' knowledge, understanding, how children understand the material, and whether it is necessary to change something.
Another issue that they need to give consider wisely, not to kill the children's the desire to learn at all. (This may be a small job in a sufficient amount so that children can and do the job, and visit numerous circles so that they had have time on for their personal interests, so to speak, not to deprive children of their childhood.) I'm not sure what you mean in this last sentence.  

I will now write another version of the above text using different wording.  This is more similar to the style of speech of a native speaker in the United States.

Is homework really necessary?

I've heard that some schools have already changed their method of learning to no homework.  I don't think that is quite right.  Children need homework.  First of all, to solidify the knowledge gained in the classroom, secondly, to help children learn to organize their time and activities, and thirdly, to give teachers the opportunity to check homework and more accurately indentify each student's academic level so that changes can be made when necessary. 

Another issue that they need to give wise consideration to is to be careful not to destroy children's desire to learn in general.....

This is another way, but not the only other way, to write your text. 

Good job!

-Chad