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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I learning English ,because i want to study work in china make friends from china. My native language is Chinese,and i grew up in China. I enjoy make friends and climming ,swinmming, travling.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I would like to study and working in China and making friends from China.
My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in China.
I enjoy making friends, climbing*, swinmming and traveling.

 

Red - mistakes

* - In this case I guess you meant Climbing



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 First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm/I am learning English, because I want to study and work in China, and make friends from China. (I really don't understand it >.<)

(I am learning English, because I want to study, work and make friends from China)
My native language is chinese, and I grew up in China. 
I enjoy make friends and climbing, swimming, traveling.

 

 

Corrections are in red and suggestions in blue ^.~ 

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