Hedgehog in the fog
Hedgehog in the fog.
- I necessarily will, you hear? I necessarily will, - Bear said.
Hedgehog nodded.
- I necessarily will walk back to you, for better for worse. I always will be near with you.
Hedgehod looked at Bear quiet eyes and was silent.
- Well, why are you silent?
- I believe you, - Hedgehog said.
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If you meant the "no agitation" meaning, "calm eyes" would be better. But, it somehow not suits the story lines.
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I don't think so. Since 'eyes' is noun, 'quiet' should be an adjective. And no meaning of it in my dictionary gives a correct interpretation to it. As far as I know, "quiet" means remain silent(without talking or making noise). So, no. sorry.
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"Hedgehod looked at Bear quiet eyes and was silent". Quiet eyes - does this make sense?
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Correction in my first comment: "and it must have never broken his word". Somehow, the phrase before 'and' and the 'phrase after 'and' are not coherent. :( :)
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Thank you. and thanks for sharing.
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