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my emosions why i like you i dont know how to say. Affection come to me gently, i dont know what to do. Its the first time in my life i have known to like a boy. It mean like everything of that boy, from eyes to smile, mean dream about you, the first thing i saw when i open my eyes is only you, mean fell waiting restlessly worry when you sulk. but i have nothing for you to like me. i cant be near you for you to lean on my shoulders when you are lonely. i dont have time engouh to go out with you, i dont have much money to by you new gifts, but i have a restless sincere love. Three minutes is too short if you compare them to a date. Three words like "I LIKE YOU" are too hard to say immediately. And 3 years for me to try ,otherwise it will disappper. and 3 mins is time for me to speak about all my innermost feelings love or like, or just an impression.... no need to explant, cuse deep in my heart. each smile you make, each look into your eyes makes my heart almost shattered into pieces.

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My emotions   <3

  What makes me like you?  I don't know.  It is hard to explain. I feel these emotions and I don't know how to stop them. It's the first time in my life I have liked a boy. It means that like everything about you, from your looks to your smile, it means dreaming about you. You are the first thing I see when I open my eyes. I wait restlessly for you and worry when you are unhappy. But I think there is nothing that you can possibly like about me.

  I can't be near enough to you to let you lean on my shoulder when you are lonely. I don't have enough time to go out with you, I don't have much money to buy you new gifts, but I have a restless, sincere love.

 Three minutes is too short if you compare them to a date.

 The three words like "I LIKE YOU" were too hard to say immediately.

 And I have only three more years to try,otherwise it will disappper. 

 But three minutes is enough time for me to speak about all my innermost feelings. 

     Love or like, or just an impression....
no need to explan, because deep in my heart, each smile you make, each look into your eyes, makes my heart almost shatter into pieces.

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my emotions

I don't know how to explain why I like you i dont know how to say. Affection come to me gently; I dont know what to do. It's the first time in my life I have known to liked a boy. It means that I like everything about of that boy, from his eyes to his smile.  It means dreaming about you, the first thing I see i saw when I i open my eyes is only you.  It means fell waiting restlessly and worrying when you sulk, but I i have nothing for you to like about me.
I i can't be near you for you to lean on my shoulders when you are lonely.  I i don't have enough time engouh to go out with you,  I i don't have much money to by you new gifts, but  I i have a restless and sincere love (for you).
Three minutes is too short if you compare them to a date.
The three words like "I LIKE YOU" are too hard to say immediately.
And 3 years for me to try, otherwise it will disappper.
and 3 mins is time for me to speak about all my innermost feelings
love or like, or just an impression....
no need to explain, because deep in my heart, each smile you make, each look into your eyes, makes my heart almost shattered into pieces.

 

Nice entry.  There are a few lines that are grammatically correct, but I suspect don't mean quite what you are trying to say.  Good luck!  :)

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You write very well, congratulations. The love is a wonderful feeling, good luck in your love life.
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The three words are I LOVE YOU !!. Be brave, say them , it's good.

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