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About Freedom I have been thinking about the definition of freedom. Some will come with, "defining freedom is limiting freedom", and maybe they are right. Then let me put it this way, how do freedom is expressed? My opinion is this: having freedom is having a absolut reference for making decisions. In most case the 'reference of freedom' are ourselves, and this imply in no absolut reference. Maybe I have to define 'absolut' ( and it is nothing about the vodka) but i will let it for another notebook entry. Correction, suggestion and commentaries. Grateful.

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Here in los estados unidos, freedom is a big thing. People are always talking about freedom, and you will here it referenced often, in songs, and people will often say things like, 'like your freedom, thank a vet (someone who fought in a war). Supposedly, back in 1776, when the founding fathers wrote our Bill of Rights and constitution, they included in it protections of various kinds of freedom for the citizens. These include, freedom of the press, the right to bear arms (the right to own a gun, essentially), freedom from unreasonable search and seizure by the government, the right to representation, and some others. There have been numerous instances of violations of the freedoms by the government over they years, however. Some of the most notable are the existence of racist "Jim-Crow" laws, which existed in southern states until the 60's, the internment of Japanese-American citizens during WWII in camps, the patriot act of the Bush administration, and also some attempts by some law-makers to annul the right to bear arms. But does there really exist freedom here? Many people are not free from poverty and most people have to live under the rigid constraints of corporations in order to survive. I hope this is interesting for you to read. Sometimes I go on and on...ironically, if I were to meet you in person I might not be able to think of more than five sentence to say. Sometimes anyway.
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About Freedom

I have been thinking about the definition of freedom. Some will say, "defining freedom is limiting freedom", and maybe they are right. Then let me put it this way, how is freedom expressed? My opinion is this: having freedom is having an absolute reference for making decisions. In most cases the 'reference of freedom' is ourselves, and this implies no absolute reference. Maybe I have to define 'absolute' (and it has nothing to do with the vodka) but I will leave this for another notebook entry.

I would be grateful for any corrections, suggestions and comments.

 

I'm not sure if I formated the text the way you intended, or if you intended seperate paragraphs. In English, there are two indefinate articles: 'a' and 'an'. 'A' is used before words beginning with consonants, 'an' is used for words words beginning with a vowel, also with and 'h'. 'An honorary degree', for example. There might be maybe, five exceptions to this rule though.

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About Freedom

I have been thinking about the definition of freedom. Some will come up with, "defining freedom is limiting freedom", and maybe they are right. Then let me put it this way, how do can freedom be is expressed?
My opinion is this: "having freedom is having an absolut reference (what you meant here "power") for making decisions".
In most cases the 'reference of freedom' (power of freedom) are ourselves, and this imply in no absolute reference.
Maybe I have to define 'absolute' ( and it is nothing about the vodka) but I will let it for another notebook entry.

Correction, suggestion and commentaries are welcomed.
Grateful.

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