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Something about Mid-autumn day in China Sep.22th is a traditional festival in China,it's called Mid-autumn day. On that day,the moon will be perfectly round.We are used to having moon-cakes on that day. Mooncake is a kind of pastry which have different fillings in it.The common fillings are red bean paste,red date paste,lotus paste and the tastes of many fruits.There is a kind of mooncakes with the lotus paste also have salty yolk in the middle, it's very delicious and I like the taste very much.It's better for every foreigner in China to try some mooncakes and be effected by the atmosphere of Mid-autumn.It is a part of China traditional culture. For Chinese people, Mid-autumn day is the time for family reunion.Many people far from home will miss their family especially. Now I am alone in Beijing,My parents live in another city and I can't go back for reunion on Mid-autumn day this year.It's a pity.And I hope you will have a good time with your relatives and friends on that day. There are many myths and legends about Mid-autumn day,maybe I could tell you in my next compesition.

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Something about Mid-autumn day in China

September 22nd is a traditional festival in China called Mid-autumn day.
On that day, the moon will be perfectly round. traditionally we eat moon-cakes on that day. Mooncakes are a kind of pastry which have various different fillings.The most common fillings are red bean paste, red date paste, lotus paste and the flavours of many fruits. There is a kind of mooncake with the lotus paste also have salty yolk in the middle, it's very delicious and I like the taste very much. I think foreigners in China would enjoy the mooncakes and the atmosphere of Mid-autumn. It is a part of traditional Chinese culture.

For Chinese people, Mid-autumn day is the time for family reunions. Many people far from home will miss their family especially. (?)
Now I am alone in Beijing, my parents live in another city and I can't go back to see them on Mid-autumn day this year. It's a pity. I hope you will have a good time with your relatives and friends on that day.
There are many myths and legends about Mid-autumn day, maybe I could tell you in my next composition.

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