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I like traveling and like chinese history! (Remeber to always use big I when you speak about yourself 我=I)
Im 21years old and I often imagine that I can travel around china !when i was a middle school student,I liked chinese history already and I felt chinese history seemed as a mystical goddess,she was beautiful,musicial,mystical and hard to reach. So i want to travel around China,i will take my bicyle, and a camera,a notebook and a backpack then try to get to know some curtues in different places. But i know it is very hard to make my dream come true. In china people always feel a heavy stress of there life and work-----so am I. II need to work,and take care of my family. By the way Chimera is beautiful but actual so brutish. (you should mentioned what Chimera is otherwise it sounds alitle bit strange liek something is missing.
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i like traveling and like chinese history!
I'm 21 years old.I often imagine that I can travel around the china! when I was a middle school student, I already liked chinese history,I felt chinese history was like a mystical goddess, she's beautiful, musicial, mystical and hard to reach.So i want to travel around the China,i will take my bicycle, a camera, a notebook, and a backpack (then to know some curtues in different place( <--什么意思?.But I know it is very hard dream to come true. In china, people always have a heavy stress of their are life and work....and so do I .I need to work, and take care of my family. So anyway, chimera is beautiful but actual so brutish.<---这个句子让我有一点胡涂
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I like traveling and like chinese history!
I'm 21 years old. I often image imagine that I can travel around the China! When I was a middle school student, I already liked chinese history already, I felt chinese history seems like a mystical goddess, she's beautiful, musicial, mystical and hard to touch. So I want to travel around the China. I will take my bicycle, a camera, a notebook and a backpack then to know some curtues cities in different places. But I know it is very hard for it to come true. In china, people always have a lot of heavy stress of in they are their life and work-----so am I. I need to work,and take care of my family. So anyway, China chimera is beautiful but actual also so very brutal.
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