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try some words,thanks fri help me (not clear) Did you mean:
"Trying some words, thank you for helping me"
When comparing the two holidays, it is clear that the Western Valentine’s Day and Double Seventh Day belong to the same type of commemorative festival. (delete) Western Valentine’s day is full of religious meaning(not clear?), but Chinese Double Seventh day goes beyond romantic beliefs (not clear), and they both have cultural connotation. With the development of economics, the Chinese are focusing on bringing in western culture from abroad, which integrates Western Valentine’s (delete) into Chinese society (delete). Though both festivals meet together in China, (delete) they are very different.
Final Correction:
When comparing the two holidays, it is clear that the Western Valentine's Day and Double Seventh Day bleong to the same type of commemorative festival. Western Valentine's Day is full of religious meaning, but Chinese Double Seventh Day goes beyond romantic beliefs. However, they both have cultural connotation. With the development of the economy, the Chinese are focusing on bringing in Western culture from abroad, which integrates Valentine's Day into Chinest society. Though both festivals may meet together in China, they are very different.
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