English 2
I tried to write something using the new words. It is nonsense :D Correct please.
There was a thrifty old man who lived in the old shabby log cabin on the isthmus connecting two forests. He grew cereals and kept it in his attic. He also kept barrels with the wine in his basement. A big tree grew near the house. It had big branches and roots. The old man had a son who was a suave young man and was going to be the old man's heir. His son lived in the house on the meadow. His entrance to his father's house was always a pleasure to the old man.
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English 2
I tried to write something using the my new words. It is nonsense :D Correct please.
There was a thrifty old man who lived in the an old shabby log cabin on the isthmus connecting two forests. He grew cereals and kept it them in his attic. He also kept barrels with the wine in his basement. A big tree grew near the house. It had big branches and roots. The old man had a son who was a suave young man and was going to be the old man's heir. His son lived in the a house on the meadow. His entrance into his father's house was always a pleasure to the old man.
Notes: Very minor changes were needed to correct this essay in a technical manner. The sentence in italics is unusual but technically correct. This sentence is unusual in a manner which grabs an English readers attention because we have a slight thinking pause about its meaning.
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