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About me!! ^^~ I'm a Vietnamese girl, and now I'm studying English as my major subject at the University. One of my dreams is to study abroad, so I want to improve my English as well as want to make friends with many people around the world.~ Another thing about me is that I'm a fan of K-pop, especially fan of BIGBANG and 2NE1 ^^~ Nice to talk with you!!~

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About me!! ^^~

I'm a Vietnamese girl, and now I'm studying English as my major subject at the University. One of my dreams is to study abroad, so I want to improve my English as well as want to make making friends with many people around the world.~
Another thing about me is that I'm a fan of K-pop, especially fan of BIGBANG and 2NE1 ^^~
Nice to talk with you!!~

 

Only a minor mistake, very good effort. Well done!!

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@wushujosh: Thank you very much ^^~ I'm trying to improve my writing skill. Please to make friends with you!!
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good introduction. Only one minor mistake that stands out to me and its not even worth correcting here as you made yourself completely understandable. Well done.

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