Chinese letter - 写中文信

Hello! 大家好！This summer, I made regular language exchanges with Chinese friends. We used to have a chat eating an ice-scream or having a tea. One of the waitress was also Chinese, but she was so pretty that I didn't dare to speak with her more than on one spare occasion. This month I came back to this place, but this Chinese waitress isn't working here anymore. A colleague of her told me that she will give her a message on my behalf, so I want to write a letter, in Chinese, from my hand. Is this text correct?

小张你好！
我叫Stéphane，是个法国人，正在学习汉语,你还记得我吗？
以前我经常在哈根达斯跟中国朋友一起做语言交换。
几个月前我跟你稍微聊了一些。
虽然我们只聊过一次天，但是我很想保持联系啊！
你现在在做其他的工作吗？
你是学生吧？
在大学你学习什么专业？
我的电子邮箱是:...
我的电话号码是:...
再见

史蒂芬

PS:
我干法西翻译。
觉得有一点不好意思，我写得不是很好!

Chinese letter - 写中文信

Hello! 大家好！This summer, I made regular language exchanges with Chinese friends. We used to have a chat eating an ice-scream or having a tea. One of the waitress was also Chinese, but she was so pretty that I didn't dare to speak with her more than on one spare occasion. This month I came back to this place, but this Chinese waitress isn't working here anymore. A colleague of her told me that she will give her a message on my behalf, so I want to write a letter, in Chinese, from my hand. Is this text correct?

小张你好！
我是Stéphane，法国人，学习汉语,你记得我吗？

 我是Stéphane，学习汉语的法国人，你还记得我吗？

以前我经常在哈根达斯跟中国朋友一起做语言交换。

以前我经常跟中国朋友一起在哈根达斯店做语言交换。

几个月前我跟你说了一点点。

几个月前我跟你交流过一点点。

虽然我们只一次聊天过，但是我很想保持联系啊！
虽然我们只聊过一次天，但是我很想和你保持联系啊！

现在你做其他的工作吗？

现在你在做其他的工作吗？

你是学生吧？

在大学你学习什么专业？
你在大学学习什么专业呢？

我的电子邮箱是:...
我的电话号码是:...
再见

史蒂芬

PS:
我干法西翻译。
觉得一点不好意思，我写子得不好看哇!