First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English beacuse I want to study abroad in Canada.
My native language is Chinese, Cantonese, and I grew up in Canton.
I enjoy movie, music, running and bicycling.
I am a 20 years old. Like freedom and high efficiency.
I hope, I can make some friends to help each other in italki. haaaa

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to study abroad in Canada.
My native language is Chinese Cantonese, and I grew up in Canton.
I enjoy movies, music, running and bicycling.
I am a 20 years old  Like freedom, high efficiency.
I hope I can make some friends in italki and together  we can improve each other in italki. Haaaa

Notes: A few minor spelling mistakes - probably just hasty typing.

I have removed a surplus a

I do not understand what you mean by high efficiency

I have altered the order in the last sentence to extend and clarify your meanings.

Summary: A good introduction, you have advanced  your English writing skills.