My schedule
I am so happy to be here to describe my schedule from now to Dec 6. This period is so important for me. I need to prepare for my ILETS. If I can not get the scores of 6.5, I will have no opportunity of study in Hong Kong.
I do some listening and reading in the morning, and then writing and speaking in the rest time. Everyday is the same. I try my best to pass it.
I am grateful that some kindly persons will spend some time in improving my English, especially my spoken English. Thank you very much.
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My schedule
I am so happy to be here to share my schedule from now to Dec 6. This period is so important for me. I need to prepare for my ILETS. If I can not get a score of 6.5, I will have no opportunity to study in Hong Kong.
I do some listening and reading in the morning, and then writing and speaking the rest of the time. Everyday is the same. I willtry my best to pass it.
I am grateful that some kindly persons will spend some time helping me to improve my English, especially my spoken English. Thank you very much.
Hi Sophie,
Orange entries are strongly suggested corrections. One important change is I try my best to pass it becomes I will try to pass it because you are talking about a future act.
Green entries are possible better words, and I have only indicated one here.
Your English is pretty good from what I have seen. I hope your achieve your goals and feel free to ask me any questions you may have on the way to your goal.
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Also in my correction, please note that there should be a comma between will and try. I somehow deleted the required space.
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