How to solve Meng is my best friend,not one of the best friends.I think she is more like a relative than a friend to me .Her ideas are always so grotesque that they are beyond many pepole's imaginatio

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How to solve Meng is my best friend,not one of the best friends.I think she is more like a relative than a friend to me .Her ideas are always so grotesque that they are beyond many pepole's imagination.Her major is construction-a rather practical subject ,but she doesn't like it .Meng just likes literature and she keeps a diary on a daily basis.Recently she issues a log in her QQ zone.Every day she spends a lot of time on writing and she even doesn't attend major classes.I'm worried about her .I talked this matter with her but she didn't care whether she can complete her academics and she just wanted to persue her dream.I am afraid that after graduation,she can't make a living let alone her dream.So now I just make a determination to study hard and make money to help her.What do you think of that?I am out of my wits and this is the best solution I can come up with now.

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Meng is my best friend,not just one of my best friends.I think she is more like a relative than a friend to me .Her ideas are always so grotesque that they are beyond many people's imagination.Her major is construction-a rather practical subject ,but she doesn't like it .Meng just likes literature and she keeps a diary on a daily basis.Recently she started a log in her QQ zone.Every day she spends a lot of time on writing and she even doesn't even attend her major classes.I'm worried about her .I discussed this matter with her but she didn't care whether she can complete her academics and she just wanted to persue her dream.I am afraid that after graduation,she can't make a living let alone fulfill her dream.So now I am determined to just study hard and make money to help her.What do you think of that?I am out of my wits and this is the best solution I can come up with now.

This is a great start! All the things I added are small details. One difference I wanted to show you was the difference between talk and discuss:

You can "talk about a matter" with someone - "talk" needs the preposition "about"
or "discuss a matter" with someone - "discuss" does NOT need any preposition

Thank you.I will try my best to help her.In fact,I really understand her passion for literature.Everyone has the right to pursue his or her dream.I will offer my hand whenever she meets difficulty.And Steve H,thank you for modifying this passage.My writing really needs to be improved

I assume that she is an adult, and as such, she is free to make her own choices, and sometimes that can also mean her own mistakes. You can try to counsel her, but if her heart is set on a particular path, then as a good friend wish her the best, but be ready to catch her if she falls.

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Meng is my best friend, and not simply one of my best friends. I think she is more like a relative than a friend to me. Her ideas are always so grotesque that they are beyond many people's imagination. Her major is Construction, a rather practical subject, but she doesn't like it. Meng just likes literature and she keeps a diary on a daily basis. Recently she wrote a log in her Qzone page. Every day she spends a lot of time on writing and she even doesn't attend major classes. I'm worried about her. I talked about this matter with her, but she didn't care whether she can complete her academics and she just wanted to pursue her dream. I am afraid that after graduation, she won't be able to make a living, let alone acheive her dream. So now I'm just determined to study hard and make money to help her. What do you think of that? I am out of my wits and this is the best solution I can come up with now.

Friends,I really don't know what to do.just give me some suggestion and as a by-product please modify this passage,I wouuld be grateful if you could do that

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