My nephew and a bike.
Hello, today im going to write about my nephew.
His name is Daniel, and he has 7 years old. i think he is very clever, he love books, stories, cartoons and video games of course. But he have a problem, he can not learn to ride a bike, i try teach him with training wheels, but he has fear. he never fell off the bike, but about strange reason he has fear. i hope he gets over the fear.
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My nephew and a bike.
Hello, today I'm going to write about my nephew.
His name is Daniel, and he is 7 years old. i think he is very clever, he loves books, stories, cartoons and video games of course. But he has a problem, he can't (or cannot) learn to ride a bike, i try to teach him with training wheels, but he has fear. he never fell off the bike, but for a strange reason he has fear. i hope he gets over the fear.
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Hola, hoy voy a escribir sobre mi sobrino. Su nombre es Daniel, y tiene siete años. Pienso que él es muy listo, le gustan los libros, los cuentos, los dibujos animados y por su puesto los video juegos. Pero él tiene un problema, no puede aprender a montar en bici (o bicicleta). He intentado enseñarle con ruedas de entrenamiento (o ruedines--> es un diminutivo de rueda) pero tiene miedo. Él nunca se ha caido de la bici pero por alguna extraña razón tiene miedo que espero que se vaya.
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I read your text. I tried translate in spanish. Please correct my mistakes.
Hola, hoy voy a escribir sobre mi sobrino.
Su nombre es Daniel, y tiene siete años. Pienso que él es muy listo, le gustan los libros, las historias, los dibujos animados y claro que sí juego video.
Pero tengo un problema, no puedo aprender a montar la bici, intenté lo enseñar...
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My nephew and a bike.
Hello, today im I'm going to write about my nephew.
His name is Daniel, and he has is 7 years old. i I think he is very clever, he loveS books, stories, cartoons and video games of course. But he have HAS a problem, he can not learn to ride a bike, i I try teach him with training wheels, but he has fear. he never fell off the bike, but about strange reason he has fear.i I hope he gets over the fear.
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My nephew and a bike.
Hello, today I'm going to write about my nephew.
His name is Daniel, and he is 7 years old. I think he is very clever, he loves books, stories, cartoons and of course video games (This sounds more natural with the "of course" before the final item). But he has a problem, he cannot learn to ride a bike. I have tried to teach him (I think the present perfect is better here) with training wheels, but he is scared (again, sounds more natural than "has fear"). He has never fallen off the bike, but for a strange reason he is scared. I hope he gets over the fear. (could also say "I hope he overcomes...", however this is slightly more formal).
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