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enjoying learning and appreciate others people Now it is my lunch time , so i would like to write something here while eating lunch having broccoli ,grate carrot with pepper and fried - egg which i cooked yesterday night after had finished my accounting class, and unexpectedly my manager brought many beefs and we all are very lucky for she shared the beefs with all our office colleagues.beef is my favorite meat , but it is very expensive in shanghai , sometimes i will buy some as a special treat to compensate myslef for a hard working day. hehe... today it is a shining day without wind outside in shanghai ,but unfortuately i have to sit in the office .

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enjoying learning and appreciate others people

Now it is my lunch time , so I would like to write something here while eating lunch having broccoli ,grated carrot with pepper and a fried  egg which I cooked yesterday night after I had finished my accounting class, and unexpectedly my manager brought many a lot of beef and we all are very lucky for she shared the beef with all our office colleagues. Beef is my favorite meat, but it is very expensive in Shanghai, sometimes I will buy some as a special treat to compensate myself for a hard working day. hehe...


Today it is a shining sunny day without wind outside in Shanghai ,but unfortunately I have to sit in the office .

Notes: Beef is an English word that has a number of meanings. When used to refer to meat, it is both singular and plural. Beefs is not correct when used this way.

 

However beef can also be used to mean a complaint. In that situation, beefs is acceptable. (odd isn't it ? )

 

With this sentence "Today it is a shining day without wind outside in Shanghai ,but unfortuately I have to sit in the office ."


You could rewrite it as "Today it is a sunny, still day in Shanghai but unfortunately I have to sit in the office"


you are using shining to mean the sun is shining. So just say sunny.

When the wind is not blowing, we can say that it is still. ( which also is a word with other meanings) And we can assume from the context that when you say it is sunny and still, you mean outside. So the word outside can be left out.

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