My essay

Never trust appearances!
To start with there are many people in our world. We all have different races, gender, colour of skin and appearances. As a matter of fact appearance is very important for us. No wonder that there is a saying -''Judge not of men and things at first sight''. If we see some person, we always look at his clothes or faces. This is the first things that become interesting for us. Only after that do we usually start talking to him. Unfortunately, people often make many errors with their opinion about people that they meet. For example: if some man looks well, if he has pretty appearance, neat and smells nice, we can think that he is a decent person. But it may not be true. He can have bad temper or, in general, he is a maniac...
What is more, our eyes do not always tell us truth. And also vice versa. We can see an unkempt person, maybe he has an ugly appearance but we shouldn't make a fast decision about this man. He could be poor so can't afford to buy good clothes, maybe he is ill or something else. There are many reasons. But maybe he is a very kind, clever and cute person, but it just can't be seen in his appearance.
Our conclusions are that we can offend a good man and trust the bad one. And this has become common that we judge only by appearances.
Therefore, my advice to you is to learn to look deeper, into the soul, in spite of the first impressions and appearance!

Good! Just a few little errors and some words in the wrong order.