First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because it's a very important and beautiful language and the beautiful. It has became the language of the world and includes join a lot of different cultures in one place together.
I need to learn English because it's essential, especially in my field. I also want to become identify know more about with the many different cultures and get to know become identify with the more friends
I enjoy swimming and most sports, especially football, and I like to read and learn a lot.

I'd like to make a little note on 'become identify'; be careful when you translate a word from your language to English because there are so many expressions for saying one thing for example 'to know'; with 'culture' or anything abstract they use the expression 'to know more about something' but with people they use the expression 'to get to know someone' instead.

But overall, you've done a good job :)) keep working!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because it is a very important and beautiful language and the beautiful.  It has become the language of the world and includes a lot of different cultures in one place.
Learning English is essential, especially in my field. I also want to become identify with the many cultures and become identify with the more friends.
I enjoy swimming and most sports, especially football, and I like to read and learn a lot.

Not bad at all :)