First notebook entry: Introducing myself Oh,ok,this is my first time to try to write on the web.I kown L have lots of wrong in this and I hope you can correct me. Let me intorduce myself .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Oh,ok,this is my first time to try to write on the web.I kown L have lots of wrong in this and I hope you can correct me. Let me intorduce myself . I`m 15 years old , I just reading high school and I live in school, so I am not always surf the internet. I like to watch American movies like Twlight , Harry potter , Men in black and so on.I also like to listen the American music like Someone like you , You belong with me , Poker face ,Complicated... Of cause I like Avril ,Adele.... I love music very much no matter it was which countries. I can play the piano a little. Oh , time it`s not early ,I must do my homowork .That really very lot. Thanks to you can help me correct my mistake. :-D by candy

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Oh, OK, this is my first time to try to write on the web. I know I have lots of mistakes in this and I hope you can correct me.
Let me introduce myself.
I`m 15 years old, I just attend high school and I live in school, so I am not always able to surf the internet.
I like to watch American movies like Twlight, Harry Potter, Men in Black and so on. I also like to listen to American music like Someone Like You, You Belong with Me, Poker Face and Complicated. Of course I like Avril and Adele.
I love music very much no matter which country it is from.
I can play the piano a little.
Oh, the time is late, I must do my homework. I have a lot of it.
Thank to you if you can help me correct my mistakes.
:-D
by Candy

The punctuation goes right after the word, then leave a space.

Proper nouns (which includes titles) must be capitalized.

When writing a list, separate the last two with a conjunction such as and or or. The rest of the items are separated with commas.

These corrections add missing parts of speech or incorrect form (tense) of speech.

I made some substitutions to how we would actually say things, and some spelling corrections.

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