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Getting colder It is getting colder now. When I go out, I have to wear wind coat to keep me warm. The leaves get yellow little by little, and some of them fall from the branch. I will fly to Beijing next Monday. And I hear from newspaper that Beijing is much colder than Shanghai. Winter comes. Who can stop its step? I wish it will be over quickly because I hate winter. In my view, winter means cold and wet, there is no way to avoid the feeling in southern places as we haven't any heater.

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Getting colder

It is getting colder now. When I go out, I have to wear a wind coat to keep me warm. The leaves get yellower little by little, and some of them fall from their branches.

I will fly to Beijing next Monday. And I hearread from a newspaper that Beijing is much colder than Shanghai. Winter comes. Who can stop its step? I wish it will be over quickly because I hate winter. In my view, winter means cold and wet, and there is no way to avoid the feeling 1in southern places assince we haven't anydo not have a heater.

 

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Winter also means fewer insects.

1. "Southern Places" implies somewhere close to the equator, which is characteristically hot; especially when referring to southern places relative to China. Do you mean that there is no way to avoid winter by travelling to a southern place, or there is no way to avoid winter within southern places? I would think that southern places can evade cold weather effectively.

Do you mean:

A: ...there is no way to travel to a southern place and avoid this weather since we....

B: ....there is no way to avoid the feeling of winter in a southern place... (this also is out of context since Beijing is a northern place)

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My best season is ً" WInter " ;)

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