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Finally I went to a Neko-cafe
Finally I went to a Neko-cafe about two weeks ago with my friends.
It was a lot of fun!
I've always wanted to go to a Neko-cafe, but didn't have a chance to go.
A Neko-cafe is a place where you can meet a lot of cats, and spend a time with them. You don't need to bring your cat. Cats are waiting for us you there.
When we arrived at the Neko-cafe, There was a note was on the door.
It said, "Please open and close the door immediately." At first I couldn't understand the meaning what it meant, but soon I understood. When we opened the door,one cat was (tried to run/ started running) away from the shop.
(She (or he)/It) was picked up by the shop staff.
Inside the shop,there were many cats and I got very excited. I love cats so much!
Soon after we went into the shop, meal time was started [passive]/the staff started meal time [active].The shop staff prepared their food and they the cats began to eat. ['they' here would refer to the shop staff, unless you identify a new subject. You can say, "The shop staff prepared the cats' food and the cats began to eat", or use the sentence above.]
There were some cats which who tried to eat the other cat's food. They were put into cage for a while to so they (could not to eat the food/wouldn't do that).
I really wanted to touch and hug the cats, but I waited until they finished eating.
But after they eat ate, most of them began to sleep because they got ate too much food. I again couldn't wouldn't touch them because if (they were touched [passive/I touched them [active]) while they're sleeping,they would/might be annoyed.
After all In the end, I couldn't/didn't get a chance to hug(←I mean だっこする)any cats, but I was satisfied because they were so cute.
The next time I go to a Neko-cafe, I would like to avoid the meal time. I want to play with them while they're awake.
OMG! This is soooo cute! I want to go!
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