LZ's notebook entry: Sep 13, 2010
To live a life I need heart beat,To have heart beat I need a heart,To have heart I need happiness,To have happines I need a friend,To have frined I need you.-writing by my best friend.
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LZ's notebook entry: Sep 13, 2010
To live a life, I need a heart beat.To have a heart beat, I need a heart.
To have a heart, I need happiness.
To have happiness, I need a friend.
To have a
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It seems like it is a poem, it will be a lot more elegant if it was spaced out like my bottom example! Enjoy!
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LZ's notebook entry: Sep 13, 2010
To live a life, I need a heart beat. To have a heart beat, I need a heart. To have a heart, I need happiness. To have happiness, I need a friend. To have aWant to progress faster?
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