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HALLOWEEN.
I don't like Halloween. It's not a Hispanic holiday. Besides, it's not a pretty holiday; it's focused around terror and horror. Is that fun? Not for me. I prefer Christmas or birthdays, but I don't like Halloween.
I don't know why we have to celebrate Halloween. It is a holiday for the USA (we would either say North America or USA) or UK, so what sense does it make for us to celebrate this holiday? It's nonsense. However, here people like to get ideas from other countries. Perhaps we celebrate for kids. People make up the kids and buy candies for them. I will not give candy to kids. (The plural of "candy" can also be the same as the singular. Ex: I ate a lot of candy.)
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I agree with you there; I don't like being scared by other people, especially people I don't know. On the other hand, it is a lot of fun to dress up sometimes. People at my school usually dress up as something silly rather than frightening. Today someone in my class was dressed up as a taco! xD
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HALLOWEEN.
I don´t like Halloween. It´s not a Hispanic feastival. Besides, it´s not a pretty feastival to fear around terror or horror. Is that funny? Not for me. I prefer Christmas or the birthday, but I don´t like Halloween.
I don´t know why we have to celebrate Halloween. It is a feastival for the USA or UK, but what sense has this feastival for us. It's nonsense! However, here people like to get thinks for ideas from other countries. Perhaps we celebrate for the kids. People make up costumes for the kids and buy them candies. I will not give candies to kids.
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