First notebook entry: Introducing myself

It's an amazing day.I just got my first part-time job in at my university life._Although the pages wage are is not [very] decent,_I still feel so satisfied with myself.
In the evening,_I had a small talk with one of my high school classmates,_who is a humorous girl._She asked my me whether I have a boyfriend or not._Of course my answer is not no._Maybe the this fact is too surprising for I have am already 21 and never had a boyfriend before._But for me, it's ok._I don't mind._I didn't have supper,_for I have had a long meeting to attend._Now,_I was  am doing some writing,_I know I'm not good at English,_I do want to do sth to change it._I believe I can make it._Come on._Tomorrow is another day!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

It was a amazing day.I just got first part-time job in my university life. Although the pages were not decent,I still feel so satisfied with myself.
In the evening,I had a small talk with one of my high school classmates,who is a humorous girl. She asked me for boyfriend. My answer was not. the fact might  too surprising for her. I have already 21 and never had a boyfriend before. But for me ,It's ok. I don't mind it. (I didn't have supper)(I don't under stand this word) For that I have a meeting to attend. Now,I was doing some writing ,I know, I am not good in english. I  want to do (sth)(I don't under stand this word) to change it. I believe, I can make it. come on .Tomorrow is another day!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

It's a amazing day. I just got my first part-time job in my university life. Although the pages (pages???? pages are in a book) are not decent,i still feel so satisfied with myself.
In the evening, I had a small talk with one of my high school classmates, who is a humorous girl. She asked my me whether i I have a boyfriend or not. Of course my answer is not. Maybe the this fact is too surprising for I have am already 21 and never had a boyfriend before. But for me ,It's it's ok. I don't mind. I didn't have supper, for i I have a long meeting to attend.Now, i I was have to do some writing , I know i'm not good at eEnglish, i Ido want to do sth (don't use this in writing) to change it. i I believe i I  can make it. Ccome on, Ttomorrow is another day!

你英文说得不好

Put a space after every period "." or comma ",".

Always capitalize "I" and "I'm", because after all you're important. Do NOT capitalize it or it's.

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Alex

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

It's a amazing day.I just got my first part-time job in my university life.Although the pages are not decent,i still feel so satisfied with myself.
In the evening,I had a small talk with one of my high school classmates,who is a humorous girl.She asked me whether i have a boyfriend or not.Of course my answer is not.Maybe the fact is too surprising for I have already 21 and never had a boyfriend before.But for me ,It's ok.I don't mind.I didn't have supper,for i had a long meeting to attend.Now,i am doing some writing ,I know i'm not good at english,i do want to do sth to change it.i believe i can make it .come on .Tomorrow is another day!