First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English.I am a collage student,but my English is poor.I have passed the CET4,but I think it is just lucky for me.I never think I can win (pass or do well on) in the exam. As we know English is very important in the social,I really want to learn it well. (put a space after each period) But I Iack of the enthuasism and persistance. (put a space after each period) I think may be I need some help to improve it.
My native language is Chinese,(put a space after each period AND after each comma) and I grew up in Quanzhou, (put a space after each period and comma) Fujian province.
I am learning dancing in my university,(put a space after each period and comma) and I enjoy reading novers (novels)  
Thanks.

Hi Sylvia,

 We don't "win" exams. We "win" games we play, like basketball, chess, etc. We "pass" or "do well on" exams...... or we "fail" or "do poorly" on exams.

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Blessings!!

Alex