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IELTS first task, Please correct me Dear Mr. Ali, I am writing to you regarding the financial report that i was supposed to email you next Monday. As I will not be able to deliver it on time and I was hoping to get your permission for one week extinction. Due to the work force shortage we are experiencing at our office this period, it has been very difficult to devote myself to my routine job only. As you are aware last month we had to let go three of our employees to reduce budget. Moreover at this time of the year our sales in Alexandria are at its best that of course require more effort from everyone in our office. I realize that the financial report is crucial in the company next meeting on the 4th of March, so I sincerely hope you would accept my deep apologies about the delay. Starting from the upcoming week end I will be working on the report. I expect to finish it on Wednesday at most and will be sending it to you at the same day. Yours sincerely, Samah

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IELTS first task, Please correct me

 

Dear Mr. Ali,

I am writing to you regarding the financial report that I was supposed to email you next Monday. As I will not be able to deliver it on time and I was hoping to get your permission for one week extension.

Due to the work force shortage we are experiencing at our office this period, it has been very difficult to devote myself (entirely) to my routine job only. As you are aware, last month we had to let go (of) three of our employees to reduce budget (/due to budget reductions). Moreover at this time of the year our sales in Alexandria are at their best. That of course requires more effort from everyone in our office.

I realize that the financial report is crucial in the (next) company next meeting on the 4th of March, so I sincerely hope you would (will) accept my deep apologies about (for) the delay.

Starting from the upcoming weekend I will be working on the report. I expect to finish it on Wednesday at most (the latest) and will be sending it to you at (on) the same day.

Yours sincerely,

Samah

 

This is really well written, there are just a few little details that you could change. I would sign the letter with your full name.

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