Today is our festival :D (correct me please)

I thought that it will  would be great if I shared this with my ItalkI friends. Today is our festival. It is a religious celebration. As Muslims, we celebrate the end of our haj " the holy duty to our holy land in KSA". That day also is the day where  when Abraham was saved by God. God ordered Abraham to slaughter his son to test the power of his belief and then God exempted him from carrying out  doing this order after Abraham showed that he was willing to do anything to obey God. In  During this festival ,we celebrate this incident and remind ourselves that our religion shares common things with other religions that are  rooted in Abraham's religion. We are really happy to take those days off. I am going to travel with family and friends to relax and enjoy my time.

Nice writing, I just polishd it a little