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Hi Canan,
How are you doing? I hope you are well.
I have a birth party on Sunday out home, so I would like to invite you to have fun together, the party will be in the garden which is front of my house that we were at last week, I am really looking foreword to hearing your agreement.
I am planing to play rock music there according to order many of presents.
You should be enjoy in this party because you love rock music as I know.
I would be so grateful if you participle me this concert.
The best regards
Asma
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Have I any mistakes?
Hi Canan,
How are you doing? I hope you are well.
I have a birthday party on Sunday out at home, so I would like to invite you to have fun together, the party will be in the garden which is at the/in front of my house that we were at last week, I am really looking foreword forward to hearing your agreement reply.
I am planning to play rock music there according to order many of presents at the request of the guests (?).
You should be enjoy in this party because you love rock music as I know.
I would be so grateful if you participle me this concert could make it.
The best regards
Asma
Great writing!! I hope this helps
(''make it'' means ''to attend an event'')
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