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Iberian Linx In my town I belong to different associations inasmuch as in my town there is a big social life and there are a lot of associatons, sport associations, religious associations, natural and cultural associations and so on. In total there are over 120 associations where I live. Last Sunday, the members of a natural association I belong it went to practise hiking to a Natural Park near my town, northern Andalucia. This Natural Park is a biological reserve of a wild animal, the Iberian Linx. This specie is in extinction danger. There are only two areas where this feline live in the north of Andalucia and another area is in the south of Andalucia. Sometimes this big wild cat crosses whole Andalucia, of a area to another one looking for food and couple. A lot linxes died when they cross the roads and motorways. There are only 120 animals. The Iberians Linx together with the Bengala Tiger are the two most endangered species. It a pity that this animal died out, despite this the Spanish government donate a lot of money to save this specie. For exemple, there is a program of captive breeding, another program is for breeding wild rabbits, because the rabbits is the only food of the linx. Other programs are for the people sensitizasion or to make especial steps under the roads.

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Iberian Linx

In my town I belong to different associations, inasmuch as in my town there is a big great social life and there are a lot of associatons, sport associations, religious associations, natural and cultural associations and so on. In total there are over 120 associations where I live.

Association/s is OK, but group/s would probably be used here. It's also shorter!

Last Sunday, the members of a natural association I belong it went to practise hiking to in a Natural Park near my town, Northern Andalucia.

If my town (city/state) is called North Dakota I keep the N capatalised too! I apoligise for my crap US geography in advance.

This Natural Park is a 'a' is OK here, but I would use 'the' because we are introducing THE park of THE Iberian Linx is found biological reserve of a wild animal, the Iberian Linx. This species is in extinction danger danger of becoming extinct OR ' This species is critically endangered'. There are only two areas where this feline live in the north of Andalucia and another area is in the south of Andalucia.

Species always has an 's'. One species, two species, many species.

Sometimes this big wild cat crosses the whole Andalucia, of a from one area to another one, looking for food and couple a mate. A lot linxes died when they cross the roads and motorways. There are only 120 animals left. The Iberians Linx together with the Bengala Tiger are the two most endangered species. Good sentence!

It a pity that this animal died out you're saying here that the entire species is dead, and there is none left. You probably want to say 'It's a pity that the numbers are diminishing', despite this the Spanish government donate a lot of money to save this species. Or maybe because of this? For example, there is a program of captive breeding, another program is for breeding wild rabbits, because the rabbits is the only food of the linx. Other programs are for the people sensitizasion to make people aware of the linx, or and to make especial steps under the roads.

 

Well written. Nice work.

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Iberian Linx

In my town I belong to different associations inasmuch as in my town there is a big social life and there are a lot of associatons, sport associations, religious associations, natural and cultural associations and so on. In total there are over 120 associations where I live.

Last Sunday, the members of a natural association I belong it went to practise hiking to a Natural Park near my town, northern Andalucia.

This Natural Park is a biological reserve of a wild animal, the Iberian Linx. This species is in extinction danger of extinction. There are only two areas where this feline lives in the north of Andalucia and another area is in the south of Andalucia.

Sometimes this big wild cat crosses the whole of Andalucia, from one area to another one looking for food and couple to breed. A lot linxes died when they cross the roads and motorways. There are only 120 animals. The Iberians Linx together with the Bengala Tiger are the two most endangered species.

It a pity that this animal died out, despite this the Spanish government donate a lot of money to save this specie. For exemple, there is a program of captive breeding, another program is for breeding wild rabbits, because the rabbits is the only food of the linx. Other programs are to make people aware of the situation for the people sensitizasion or to make especial care under on the roads.

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"lynx" is written with a "y". Good luck!
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especial = special

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