Search from various English teachers...
China flag若如初见
First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning english, because i want to work in trade,i think it's so cool to work with foreigners in english and make friends withe foreigners.I have past CET-6 in university,but i can't communicate in english,which make me feel bad,if i can't speak it,why i spent four years to learn it.I dout myself, maybe i need to increase my vocabulary,i try to find the real reason i can't speak english,and now i'm on myway to solve the questions. My native language is chinese, and i grew up in china.I graduated last year(2011),has get a master's degree.I hope i can speak english fluently. I enjoy sing, playing pingpong and climbing mountains,i'm more bluntness,optimistic and i like make friends.

Corrections · 2

0

First notebook entry: Introducing Myself

I am learning English, because I want to work in trade. I think it's so cool to work with foreigners in English and make friends with foreigners. I have passed CET-6 in the university, but I can't communicate in English, which makes me feel bad. If I can't speak it, why did I spend four years to learn it? I doubt myself, maybe I need to increase my vocabulary. I try to find the real reason I can't speak English, and now I'm on my way to solve the questions.
My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in China. I graduated last year(2011), and have a master's degree. I hope I can speak English fluently.
I enjoy singing, playing pingpong and climbing mountains. I'm more blunt and optimistic and I like to make friends.

 

Don't forget the rules of punctuation spacing and capitalization. They are rules, not suggestions. Your sentence structure is excellent, even though some of the verbs used the wrong form.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today