Can anybody correct my text? 谢谢啦。
A dutiful teacher needs catch the attention and desire of her students within 15minutes. I am so happy to see all my students are finishing 2 -hours class with me, but still with fresh mind.
Does it sounds ok?
Arena
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Can anybody correct my text? 谢谢啦。
A dutiful teacher needs to capture the attention and desire of her students within the first fifteen minutes (of the lesson). I am so happy to see all my students are finishing a two-hours class with me, but still with fresh minds.
Does it sounds OK?
Arena
More or less - I've fixed minor errors and polished it. The underlined words sound a little unnatural, but I'm not sure what you could put in their place.
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