First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!!everyone.
introducing myself
I was born in japan at tokushima Tokushima, Japan.
Now I have lived in Tokyo for four years.
I have to acquire (learn) English because of work.,but I seldom don't really understand English.
Taking advantage of this opportunity,I want to go to abord abroad. -->(kind of strange with this sentence)
My hobby is hobbies are to play the playing the guitar,reading a books,making a lone domestic trip alone tours by the car,and watching a move movies.
My favorite foods are SUSHI,YAKINIKU,spaghetti,and RAMEN.
Thank you form from now on.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!!everyone.
introducing myself
I was born in japan at tokushima.
Now I have lived in tokyo for four years.
I have to acquire English because of work.but I seldom understand English.
Taking advantage of this opportunity,I want to go to abord.
My hobby is to play the guitar,reading a book,making a domestic trip alone by the car,and watching a move.
My favorite foods are SUSHI,YAKINIKU,spaghetti,and RAMEN.
Thank you form now on.

Hi Yoshi! 

I have been through Tokushima, but I don't know it very well. I am more familiar with Takamatsu. The Inland Sea is very beautiful.  Mmm, I'd love to have some sanuki udon!

I think your English will naturally improve if you can listen to it and use it, especially with native speakers. Do you have friends who speak English fluently? Listening to them and speaking with them will help. 

I want to correct this sentence for you:
"My hobby is to play the guitar,reading a book,making a domestic trip alone by the car,and watching a move."

Because you have more than one hobby, you need to say, "My hobbies are..." Also, the wording could be changed to sound more natural:
My hobbies are playing the guitar, reading books, taking trips in the car by myself, and watching movies.

I hope that's helpful!

Rae