diruz (please correct me!)

man diruz kheili ziad kar kardam . mikhastam didam ye beram cinema vali nemitunam natonestam. farsi dars nemikonam. vaught nadaram...

Tips:

1-in the second sentence you used 2 verbs from different tense.

mikhastam is past tense. nemitunam is present tense.

2-it is not necessary to write (dars).

And 1 question , why don't you write in Persian alphabet?

من دیروز خیلی زیاد کار کردم. می خواستم برم سینما ولی نتونستم. فارسی نمی خونم. وقت ندارم

It is very important that there is difference between how we talk and how we write. please mention do you like to learn how to speak in Farsi or write? For example we say (natunestam نتونستم but write natavanestam نتوانستم

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diruz (please correct me!)

man diruz kar kardam kheili ziad kar kardam ( you must write the verb at end's sentence). mikhastam ( It's better to say mikhaham) 9didam bibinam ( fe2l eltizami) ye cinema vali nemitunam. farsi dars nemikonamnemikhonam. vaught nadaram...


kheyli khob neveshti
Good luck..

It is better to wire: vaght nadaram farsi bekhoonam

diruz (please correct me!)

man diruz kheyli zaid kar kardam . mikhastam be cinema beram vali natunestam. farsi dars nemikhonam. vaught nadaram...