I love to travel ✈
Good morning!
Where did you last go on holiday?
I went on my last holyday to New York with parents. Day 3 September 2011 my parents got married and we went to NY for honeymoon. I visited museum MOMA and go to the Central Park, I go to lighted World Trade Center, Fifth Avenue, Times Square and many impressive sites of the city. If I had money, I would live in NY. I also traveled to Paris, London, Frankfurt and Amsterdam. When I travel buy gifts for my family but I can't buy on places expensives, so buy them cheap shop.
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Hi, how old are you? If your parents got married September 3th, 2011, when you were born? I confused.
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I love to travel ✈
Good morning!
Where was the last place you went on holiday?
I went on my last holiday to New York with my parents. On 3 September 2011, my parents got married and we went to NY for their honeymoon. I visited the MOMA museum MOMA and go went to the Central Park, I went to the lighted World Trade Center, Fifth Avenue, Times Square and many (other) impressive sites of the city. If I had money, I would live in NY. I had also traveled to Paris, London, Frankfurt and Amsterdam. When I travel, I buy gifts for my family, but I can't buy gifts in such expensive places expensives, so I buy them in cheap shops.
Goodbye ㋡
This photo was made taken by my father! ❥
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A lot of proper nouns for geographic locations need a "the", but Central Park doesn't for some reason. Just a tiny correction in any case.
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