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One of old write's. — ...When I was young, I thinked a lot about world's system. I pretended to observant from other planet to whom people is NOT people, they are mysterious and fantastic creatures and their ordinary functions is my investigation's object. I thinked about them, about their lives arranging. For example: there are thirty little kids (I see them like abstract beings) and in front of them stays adult specimen and talking about different trifles, which doesn't need for somebody, and kids understand it, but an adults can't understand! In the end kids becoming blinkered like earlier generation. And I surprised about one thing named "religion". We can imagine the man or the creature and idolize it. But imagine the creature and appear to other people, who doesn't idolize our creature and say "Your idol is nonsence, you need to worship OUR, not YOUR" and start to killing ourselves... This is real nonsence. I thinked about in a long while and decided to stop. It was impossible for little kid's consciousness.

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One of my old write's (maybe "entries"?).

— ...When I was young, I thought a lot about the world's system (maybe just "the world" or "how the world works"). I pretended to observe from another planet to whom where people is are NOT people. They are mysterious and fantastic creatures, and their ordinary functions is my investigation's object (more natural is "the object of my investigation"). I thought about them, about their lives arranging. For example: there are thirty little kids (I see them like as abstract beings), and in front of them, stays appears an adult specimen and talking about different trifles, which doesn't need for somebody, and kids understand it, but an adults can't understand! In the end kids becoming blinkered like earlier generation. And I was surprised about this one thing named called "religion". We can imagine the man or the creature and idolize it. But imagine the creature and appearing to other people, who doesn't idolize our (own) creature and saying "your idol is nonsence. You need to worship OUR god, not YOURS" and start to killing ourselves... This is real nonsence. I thought about in this for a long while ("for a long time" is a bit more colloquial) and decided to stop. It was impossible for little kid's consciousness.

 

I'm not sure what you meant where I highlighted in the weird green color, but good job for explaining in English something that is a bit complicated. It's not very easy!

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