Little things in life

Yesterday, I went to see a doctor because my face has many pimples. I did not feel well. Why does my adolescence come so late? I felt embarrassed when a friend said pimples are so disgusting that she could not have dinner with me, but I was not able to control it. When the doctor asked me how much money I have now,  I told her I paid for it with my bank card, then she checked my condition. I can not understand why a doctor doesn't care for his patient first but cares how much money his patient has. It took me 450 yuan for the medicine, and the doctor can't ensure that the medicine will work. If I were a doctor, I could find out the problems and cure myself or my patients, however I don't know any medical language. What a pity.

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Medicine has no plural form, but medication does.

Little things in life

Yesterday, I went to see a doctor because my face has many primples. I did not feel well. Why does my adolescence comes so late? I felt embarrassed when a friend said primples are so disgusting that she could not have dinner with me, but I cannot able to control it. When the doctor asked me how much money I had ve now?, I told her I paid for it with my bank card, and then she checked my condition. I cannot understand why a doctor doesn't care for his patient first, but cares how much money his patient brings him. It took me 450 yuan for the medicine. And the doctor can't ensure that the medicines are work. If I were a doctor ,I could find out the promblems and cure myself or my patients. However, I don't know any medical language. What a pity.