the fatastic trip to Xi'an
Three days ago,i flew to Xi'an,one of the famous ancient city of China,the capital of Shanxi province,for a visit.My schedule was full in the last two days,for the first day,i went to huaqingchi where Tang dynasty emperor and emperor queen had a bath in the warm spring,also where Chiang Kai Shek was caught on Dec 12th,1936.After that,i visited the famous place --...terra cotta warrior,the eighth wonder of world,the place is too large that i almost couldn't take a step when i came back,but it is very worthy of visiting.
during the night of the first day,i came back downtown ,and climbed the bell tower and drum-tower,both in the centre of city,they looked very great and grand when the lights were on.there is a street near the drum-tower ,called huimin road,which is famous for snack.i ate several kinds of snack in the street,very delicious,especially the noodle,you must have a try if you go to xi'an.
for the second day,it was raining in the most of time,in the morning,i went to wild goose-tower,which was rebuilt by tang dynasty emperor -wu ze tian,the only female emperor in china more than 1000 years ago.it has seven floor,very tall and grand,i climbed the top of tower and looked out of windows,what a beautiful city before my eyes.after lunch,i went to shanxi history museum,where thounds of antiquities are well preserved to show people.i spent two hours there and had a good time.while i saw these antiquities,i could not help admiring the ancient chinese people,it was them to creat such a anbudant culture and history,what an intelligent and diligent nation!but what happened to us in nowdays?we are lack of innovation and patience,we seem to retrogress,what a pity!
in a word,i visted xi'an for two days,and have an unforgettable experience there.i love xi'an:)
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the fatastic trip to Xi'an = A Fantastic Trip to Xi'an
During the night of the first day, I came back downtown ,and climbed the bell tower and drum-tower,both in the centre of city. They looked very great and grand when the lights were on. There is a street near the drum-tower called Huimin Road, which is famous for its snacks. i ate several kinds of snacks in the street. They were very delicious, especially the noodles. You must have a try if you go to Xi'an.
For the second day,it was raining i
In a word, I visted xi'an for two days,and
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Very interesting. I hope I can visit that some day.
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glad to share^_^
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glad to share^_^
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Xi'an is famous for its history and culture.It's a wonderful city that is worth visiting.Xi'an also is one of the original places of culture.Glad to share with you.
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Xi'an is the capital of Shaanxi (陕西) province.
Taiyuan is the capital of Shanxi (山西) province.
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Xi'an is indeed a beautiful city. A walk along the tree-lined sidewalks can drift you back into the history of time. Thanks for sharing your wonderful experience. ^^
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