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my school needs children's clothes my school needs children's clothes, old and new are both all right. the Tibetan area of Sichuan is located at the world's highest altitude. do people around you have clothes and shoes for children four to ten yesrs old? it is welcomed only if it's clean. because chilren himself only have little amount of clothes and there are few people to donate to them, children at this age lack clothes 0

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My school needs children's clothes, both old and new are fine. The Tibetan area of Sichuan is located at the world's highest altitude. Do people in your area/household* have clothes or shoes for children four to ten years old? The clothes must be clean. Because children themselves only have a small amount of clothes and there are few people to donate to them, children at this age don't have enough clothes.

 

*if you are talking to someone wanting to know if anyone in their village might have clothes, use "area", if you want to know if they have clothes at their house, use "household". I wasn't completely sure what you meant.

 

Blue is a corrected mistake. Green is something that I re-worded to sound better.

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Tom, do you want corrections or clothes? Sorry if I am ignorant, but aren't there 1,200,000,000 people close by to donate clothes?

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