Ghost mouse
Many years ago, when my parents and I lived in Lunahuaná. we had a piano. The piano was very old, it was older than my grandfather. Obviously, anybody played the piano but always my father cleaned the piano.
One day while we were eating and talking surprisingly the piano sounded itself. Everybody listened the sound and asked How was it possibly happened?. My grandfather told us that a long time ago a musician died in that room.
Eventually, I went to the piano and checked it while I was cleaning suddenly a mouse runaway from the piano. In the end, everybody said the muse pianist was playing a track of Beethoven
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Ghost mouse
Many years ago, when my parents and I lived in Lunahuaná. we had a piano. The piano was very old. It was older than my grandfather. Obviously, anybody (everybody) played the piano but my father always cleaned the piano (it).
One day while we were eating and talking surprisingly the piano sounded itself.(made a noise) Everybody listened to the sound and asked How was it (could this) possibly happened?. My grandfather told us that a long time ago a musician died in that room.
Eventually, I went to the piano and checked it while I was cleaning and suddenly a mouse runaway (ran away) from the piano. In the end, everybody said the muse (mouse) pianist was playing a track of ( piece by) Beethoven
Very funny and a great story! I understood exactly what you were saying.
The changes I made were similar to the way we speak English around where I live.
I hope you get some other corrections as well.
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Ghost mouse
Many years ago, when my parents and I lived in Lunahuaná. we had a piano. The piano was very old, it was older than my grandfather. Obviously, anybody could played the piano but it was always my father who cleaned it the piano.
One day while we were eating and talking we were surprised to hear surprisingly the piano playing sounded itself. Everybody listened the sound and asked what was happening How was it possibly happened?. My grandfather told us that a long time ago a musician died in that room.
Eventually, I went to the piano and checked it and while I was cleaning it suddenly a mouse suddenly runaway ran out of from the piano. In the end, everybody said the mouse pianist was playing a track of Beethoven
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Haha What a naughty mouse! :D
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