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About my memories in Australia I want to write about my memories in Australia. I visited Australia this summer vacation to stay with a Australian family. The people in Australia are so kind! I was moved by a lot of beautiful nature, colorful birds and various animals. I had a very good time there. I want to visit Australia again :) Thank you.

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About my memories in Australia

I want to write about my memories in Australia.

I visited Australia this summer vacation to stay with an Australian family.
The people in Australia are so kind!
I was moved by the beautiful nature, colourful birds and various animals.
I had a very good time there.
I want to visit Australia again :)

Thank you.

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Your English is really good! I would only make one correction and it's nothing major.

 

I visited Australia this summer vacation to stay with an Australian family.

 

an is used before words that start with a vowel sound.

a is used before words that start with a consonant sound.

There is no difference in meaning however this helps the words flow more fluently.

 

がんばってください!^-^

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Thanks!! I'm glad to hear that. Let's practice together :)
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Hello! Your English is really good! ^^ I'm not very good at studying Japanese I'm at intermediate level...I think haha
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Thanks :)

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